A lot about the lot
October 21, 2022
Imagine the bell has just rung at the end of a long day. You and 1500 other students need to leave? Some have to go home, some have to go to work, tensions are high, and cars are whizzing by.
How do the other students feel? What can you do to stop the madness? What does security think?
Students experiences
All of those questions will be answered, starting with how the students feel. According to, two current SPASH students with multiple years of driving experience. Mason Christie, a senior said, “He has been rear-ended twice as well as backed into once.” This comes down to inexperienced and careless drivers. Sam Zeuge and Mason said that there should be more than two exits. They said, “you have to be the first person out otherwise you have to wait like 20 minutes.” This is a problem because people try to cross traffic on their way out and then slows everyone down. Mason and Sam also had very strong opinions on parents being in the parking lot, more explicitly dropping their kids off in the student parking lot. By not using the drop-off loop they add to the confusion. Sam and Mason said there is no place for parents to be there especially at the start of the day as they are exiting while we are trying to enter, which causes more congestion.
What You Can Do
Here are some ways to prevent getting in avoidable accidents. According to Jayne Ubi from (Drive Safe Ride Safe), some of the best ways to avoid accidents are to back into your spot. Chayse Walter a SPASH student says ”I always back into or pull through my spot so when I leave it’s easier.” Another thing you can do to stay safe is aviving before the rush, and stay a safe distance behind other people in the parking lot. I believe these are all good tips, especially the backing into your spot because in my personal experience of two years I’ve never been hit or hit someone.
Security’s views
Have you ever wondered how security views the student parking lot? I asked a security guard Lance Lewis the same questions I asked mason and sam to see if there was a disconnect between the students and the people in charge. Lance said that he feels the students are responsible in the parking lot. I’d say for the most part that is true but not always. In response to me asking about the flow of the parking lot, he told me it’s a little congested but it works. I would have to agree with him. In response to me asking about parents in the parking lot, he said it’s a good thing because they are more responsible than the average student. I would agree with that, but I personally believe they do make harm than good.
To conclude, we don’t meet eye to eye with security. This should change, we need to be on the same page so we can make positive changes to help us. Until then it’s up to you and me to prevent accidents. We all need to do our part to make our parking lot the best it can be.
Alexius Mancl • Oct 25, 2022 at 8:13 AM
Max, your article is very well put together. I like how you were able to get different experiences from different students. I also like how you were able to get an opinion from the Security officers. I also enjoyed your conclusion and feel you did a great job concluding everything and finding a solution to the issue.
Elena • Oct 24, 2022 at 12:30 PM
I like the graphics and contest of this article. The graphics help to clear the problem, and help to see the perspective of the student. Reading this article is very easy and fluently for how you put all things together.
Lily • Oct 24, 2022 at 11:19 AM
The aspects that stood out most to me was the lead, which is awesome to get everyone’s attention to read the article. Another is the graphic used which is great to show the issue at head, and give a hint of what about the lot you’re going to talk about.
Stephanie Lieske • Oct 24, 2022 at 10:41 AM
Max, I really love your conclusion. It does a really good job wrapping everything up and restating all of your ideas. I think you do a really good job of providing problems, and solutions that we can do on our own right now. I also think it’s really good that you got both the facts from security, and the opinions of the students and included them equally in your article.
Hanah • Oct 21, 2022 at 10:16 PM
This is a very well thought out article. You can tell because you went and gave every perspective from the students that were involved in the incident to even security. Pointing out what could change really made me intrigued as a reader. Also the way your information is lead out makes it extremely easy to follow for any reader. Overall this is a well written article.
Chse Haferman • Oct 21, 2022 at 12:55 PM
The graphic at the beginning was my favorite thing out of this article. It gives a clear problem that we all have seen or experienced if we been in the SPASH parking lot. The topic itself is something that everyone can relate to as well making a better understanding point of view in the article.
Anonymous • Oct 21, 2022 at 10:42 AM
I liked the context of the article overall. There were only a few typos and it makes for an amazing story!
Reghan • Oct 21, 2022 at 9:23 AM
I really like the opening to your article, you did a great job representing how stressful it could be. I like how you brought up accidents up from the parking lot. The different ways to help are great to help people as well.
Natalie Cisewski • Oct 21, 2022 at 9:11 AM
Max, I agree very much so with your article. I do think we should be on the same page as security. In the last month, there has been a lot of accidents in the parking lot and I think we need to improve on that. I also think you had a very strong lead, really brought the problem to my mind.
Jacob Bellin • Oct 21, 2022 at 8:26 AM
amazing lead definetly got my attention. this is a topic that im interested in, great quotes and analysis to go with them. great conclusion definetly wrapped up the article